My writing test

Once in a dark foggy and damp forest there was a nerf war there was a dark navy blue team and a bright rose-red team, the teams were enzymes like in the real war they would fight all day.The rose-red team had 4 people and the navy blue the same amount but amazingly they had 3 jeeps 10 drones that can shot from the dark sky, the rose-red team had back up the backup was the airsoft team.

The navy blue team were the smartest they had lots of places that they shot  from, they shot down three  of the rose-red team and the rose red team had to call in backup early, so the blue team call in the drones and one jeep and the jeep could hold 4 people and the airsoft team could hold 10 people.Then the airsoft team started to spread out and one of them found a cabin….

So they went inside and ues that a shooting rage and then all went inside and they stayed there, but then the blue team found them after about ten mins of looking for them, the cabin was a 3 story cabin, and it had a stairway up to the front deck, but they to be careful to not be seen or court at all the slowly shot down the rose red team the drones did most of the work and the other two jeeps were called in a went into the cabin took out the other rose red team members.The amazing blue team was amazed that they had actually won then when the got back to base they planned an even better one but they were stuck can you help them plan an even more exciting nerf war please if you have an idea comment comment comment.I would love to write some nerf war stories.I would also love to know what think of this crazy story.◕‿◕

The Impossible Boy-By Leonie Agnew

On Monday 7th my class went to st margate college on the bus and when we got there all the girls were at the windows watching us come into their school and we had to walk to where the book Award was held then we had to find our seats and then we had to wait for the other schools to get in their seats then we had to be quiet and listen to the authors speeches.

My favorite author is Leonie Agnew because her books sounded amazing to read and her first book was Super Finn and the one she told us about was the Impossible boy and it was about a 6year old boy that was lost at war

How to Write a Quality Comment!

We are learning how to interact online in a kind, positive and helpful way.

Learning how to leave quality blog comments is an important part of having a blog. It teaches us how to interact with others online and enables us to continue growing our positive digital footprint.

These are my notes that I have made

compliment the writer in a positive way

Add new info

make a connection

End with a question

Proofread your comment

At the end you put your punctuation 

If you use a I by its self make sure it is a capital I

My DLO

This week we have been learning how to divide here is my DLO

hopefully you will learn  something from the video

Hope you enjoy

Here is my playground video on what to say in the playground more often than not because you could make a lot more friends. If you don't get a friend then you might get respect. Please  try these  thing because they do help.

this week we  did wild eyes me Isaac brayden and I made a volcano and the cider vinegar worked better  than the white vinegar.

sailing on wednesday