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Friday, November 9, 2018

Recount!!!!!!

Here is a great recount I wrote.



It had started off like any normal day that month, but now that I think of it dad seemed more stressed and mum was not home that night, that very next morning dad had to drop me off to grandad nonos house it was boring there so I just sat on a box while grandad mowed the lawn. I remember seeing a picture of grandad and dad playing with a bright red wagon just like the one that I used to stack boxes onto so I could stand on them to get the picture the wagon moved right from under my feet and out fell a helmet.


Then I heard the lawn mower stop and grandad come stomping into the house with a helmet in his hand. I know he would have been so mad if he had run it over with the lawnmower. Then grandad asked do you want to take the wan for a spin and I said defiantly, so we did I put on the helmet and made sure I had my arms and leg in the wagon and off we went, all of a sudden monkeys started to chase us and then we were in a jungle.

Then grandad started to run faster and faster then he jumped over me and into the back of the wagon within minutes we were over the side of a cliffed and were falling into stream with our wagon I thought that we were going to drown but the wagon soon turned into a boat and we were floating past hundreds of crocodiles then my teddy pointed at the end of the stream that was flowing down a waterfall.


Just then we dropped down down down until I felt the bottom of the sea floor then we rose and we were in a plane we were 300 hundred meters in the sky then the plane ran out of fuel we had to jump so I jumped and I pulled the parachute and fell softly to the ground were me and Grandad had something to eat.

Just then something green zapped the swing a few meters away from us then we jumped into our space suits and got in our hovercraft I pulled out me zapper and started to shot down the ufos and all of a sudden there was the biggest of them all so I grabbed out my ultra heat ray and then two big light shone in our eyes and woke me from the fight I saw I was holding a hose and dad got out the car. I said that this was the best day of my life to dad and asked for a week with grandad.

4 comments:

  1. What a cool story dude, I love your imagination! If that happened I’d be wanting to join you at granddads for some fun too.
    Well done.
    Love mum

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  2. Hi Nikoli,

    Love that you are sharing your amazing writing. Remember when writing was a Learning Pit thing for you. Great job!

    You may need to pop back into edit though, copy and paste always does a weird thing in Blogger.

    :) Mrs S

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    1. Ok thank I will work on that. How was your holiday?????

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  3. Hi Nikoli,

    it's Kyla from Kawakawa primary school in room 2 i really like the way you used wow words and good nouns.

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